User blog comment:ZMTS037S Zomspine/Cloud-pult's Backstory/@comment-5434817-20181226182431

Great script for an upcoming comic! This'll be in my pending list of to-do's for now. As for the tone, don't fret too much; this wiki also needs comics featuring stories on the emotional side as well to balance out all the happy stuff here. After all, it would be interesting to mix things up once in a while!

Bloomerang's line, "I'm so glad this is all that happened to you" kinda read like "I'm so glad this all happened to you" (haha) while I was reading through it, which kinda made me chuckle and drove me to re-read that line again to properly see all the words in it. Maybe try re-writing that line to another sentence that's less likely to be misread? But... that's just me.

That's all for my comment right now. Writing up stories is not really my forte, nevertheless, it's great to see a new story, complete with scenes and dialogues as well.