Talk:Broken Poetry/@comment-35465316-20180521050333

I'll admit, these comics have proven I've gotten too used to CWL's animesque depiction of Marigold from issue 12 despite the exact style being used for only one panel (the one where she admonishes Red-point Tulip's attitude to herself), but that's a me-problem, or at least that's what it seems to be on my end.

You've done a great job pushing Winter Melon out of "generic OC with edgy universal hatred and is also probably a huge creep" territory (if you're wondering about the second part of that, I retconned the relations that caused it) and into a fully-defined "straight man" character.

If this keeps up, we're well on track! Still gonna be a long road before figuring out promotion, though.