Talk:Issue 14: Melon-y Sleepover/@comment-98.237.148.178-20140212064619

You've blown the continuity out of line. The way I pictured this comic was a bunch of characters being racked up for a sleepover. At one point, Melon-Pult thinks that by "what's next," it means "the next melon." This is perfectly rationalized by Melon-pult's page, however, no mention of this event happens in the comic. I might want someone to write a better script and a better drawer. No offense, though.